“首先，松树的遗书土壤变成了有害土壤， 一棵老松树死了，我是一棵活了900年的树，土壤遭受污染。草原大片大片地在地球上消失。树啊、花啊都活不成了，我虽然
一棵老松树死了，动植物们都来悼念它，兔子妹妹发现树枝上有一封遗书，便大声读了起来。
when an old pine tree died， animals and plants came to mourn it. sister rabbit found a note on the branch and read it aloud.
“亲爱的朋友们，大家好！我是一棵活了900年的树，大家一定认为我是老死的，其实我的死是由于人类破坏环境造成的。
"dear friends， hello！ i am a tree that has lived for 900 years. you must think that i died of old age. in fact， my death was caused by human destruction of the environment.
“首先，土壤遭受污染。1000多年前，这里曾经是一个草木茂盛的大草原。但最近一二百年来，由于人类过度开垦、放牧，使土地沙化。有些地方还打上农药，土壤变成了有害土壤，草原大片大片地在地球上消失。树啊、花啊都活不成了，我虽然生命力强，但是也招架不住土壤的污染。植物朋友们，你们一定要远离有害土壤，不然也会送命的。
"first， the soil is polluted. more than 1000 years ago， it used to be a grassy prairie. however， in the past 120 years， due to human over cultivation and grazing， the land has been desertification. in some places， pesticides are also used， and the soil becomes harmful. large areas of grassland disappear on the earth. trees and flowers can t live. although i have strong vitality， i can t stand the soil pollution. plant friends， you must stay away from harmful soil， or you will die.
“其次，天空中的空气遭到污染。人类把废气、浓烟排放到天空，天空没有以前那样蓝了，天上的小鸟、大雁也少了许多。现在人们还用叫什么电冰箱的电器，里面的氟利昂使天空中的臭氧层遭受破坏，‘臭氧层空洞’日益扩大，强烈的紫外线照到身上，我们就会得病，你们飞行的鸟类也不例外。鸟类朋友们，你们一定要移民到一个花香鸟语的地方去。
"secondly， the air in the sky is polluted. human beings put waste gas， smoke into the sky， the sky is not as blue as before， and there are many fewer birds and geese in the sky. now people also use refrigerators. freon in them destroys the ozone layer in the sky. the "ozone hole" is expanding day by day. if the strong ultraviolet light hits us， we will get sick. your flying birds are no exception. birds friends， you must immigrate to a place where flowers and birds sing.
“最后，水质受到污染。人类制造的工业废水，没经过处理就倒进了河里，河水变浊、变臭，鱼类无法生存。鱼弟弟无法生存。鱼弟弟你要尽快告诉你的同伴，叫它们到河水清澈的地方去吧。
"finally， the water quality is polluted. industrial waste water produced by human beings is poured into the river without treatment. the river becomes turbid and stinky， and fish cannot survive. fish brother can t survive. brother fish， you should tell your companions as soon as possible to go where the river is clear.
“你们快走吧！人类破坏环境的速度不断加快，你们再不逃，到那时候会没命的。”
"let s go！ human beings are destroying the environment faster and faster. if you don t run away， you will be killed at that time. "
动植物们收拾东西，正准备走，突然又停下来了。它们在思索：“家该往哪儿搬呢？”
the animals and plants were packing up. they were about to leave when they suddenly stopped. they were thinking， "where should i move my home?"
点评：文章选材新颖、独特，以《松树的遗书》为题，富有启发性和震撼力。读后，不得不引发读者深深的思索。“植物朋友们”、“鸟类朋友们”、“鱼弟弟你要尽快告诉你的同伴”等，这些语句无不显露出小作者的一颗善良的童心。写作文应该写自己的童心、平常心，这样才能有真情实感。
comments: the article is novel and unique in material selection. it is full of inspiration and shock with the title of pine tree s bequest. after reading it， the readers have to think deeply. "friends of plants"， "friends of birds"， "brother fish， you should tell your companion as soon as possible" and so on， all of these sentences reveal the good childlike innocence of the author. to write a composition， one should write one s childlike and ordinary mind， so that one can have true feelings.
